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While it's not the most profound poem I've ever read, I enjoy it and love its message of acceptance, and the way you've portrayed it. Perhaps it's just me, but it seems like there's no end to LBGT pride poems nowadays. While this isn't a bad thing, it does mean that it's far from an original concept. It's a little too short for me to say that you've mastered the technique of poetry, although it's shortness and simplicity is part of it's charm. All in all, it's a nice piece of literature, and I love that you've conveyed a powerful idea in such a short, sweet way :3 Good job, and I hope to see more of your work in the future!
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